Sanctuary
Gliding on still waters, the dip of the oars push me forward into turtle’s murky sanctuary. Am I still in the water, or am I rowing out into the clouds…
Shardorma
A shardorma is a simple syllabic poetry form which consists of six lines following a syllable pattern of 3–5–3–3–5–7. The six lines can be a complete poem or they can be strung together as stanzas to form a long poem.
Kayaking
Sky’s looking-glass shifts
The oar dips
Dips again
Turtles go splashing
A living dream on water
Lens-Artists Weekly Photo Challenge #108: Sanctuary
Colleen’s 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge No. 189, # Poet’s Choice
Word of the Day Challenge – Dream
once again, great picture and wonderful words to go with it…
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⭐️Thank you so much!! ⭐️
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A beautiful photograph and shandorma Beth and I love the way earth and sky meet in the water – this image alone can carry us into a peaceful meditation 💙 Thank you so much for this beautiful contribution to the challenge! 💜
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Thank you so much, I find being out on the water to be very meditative and the picture takes me there as well. Thank you for having me in the challenge!! 🌟😊🌟
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You’re very welcome! 🤗💖
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Lovely words and photo, Beth. ❤️😊
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🌟Thank you and happy Friday!!🌟
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Wonderful photo and words. Shardorma may be arriving at a Fake Flamenco Poetry Challenge near you, in the future. Hope you join the August Poetry Challenge. The form is a nonet. : ) R
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That is awesome – would love to give it a try!! I will be checking it out. Thank you Rebecca! 😊🌟😊
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Gracias, Beth!
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That’s excellent. I’d not heard of a shandorma before. I’ll have to give it a try. 🙂
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Thank you, I look forward to seeing it!
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Beautiful poem. Love the photo, sanctuary, indeed!
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Thank you!! Hoping you find peaceful sanctuary through the weekend, and happy Friday!!
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A delightful Shadorma and I love the calming photo.
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🌟Txx so much! 🌟
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Most welcome!
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Great photo, great words and poetry. Well done.
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🌟thank you so much!🌟
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That’s one form that I haven’t try. Seems contrived most times I come across them, but this creation is wonderfully crafted. Perhaps …
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Thank you! It was fun trying it out
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Beautiful photo and poem. Perfectly penned. 💜
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🌟😊Thank you so much!😊🌟
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I like it!
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